Take me back - Poem by Kahee

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Jeromea (Kahee!) on Tuesday, 01-Jun-2010 1:17:24

I know I did wrong, to tell them about us. But baby let's try again. I'll do it right this time. You made me happy, I loved you so. Give me one more chance, I'll show you, I will. I will gladly take your hand in mine, and I will gladly give you all my time. Baby, understand my words, I love you, take me back. When things went wrong between us, I realized what I had done. If I could go back, I would have done things different, I would have, baby. Baby listen to me! Just stop and understand. I love you that's all I can say. Give me one more chance, take me back and don't let me go. Please... Take me back.

This poem was written for a book last year.

Post 2 by Queen Latina (Zone BBS is my Life) on Monday, 07-Jun-2010 1:58:27

awww Kahee, I seriously like this.
Meh, I won't lie, I don't have a total fascination with freeverse poetry, but I still liked this one. :)

Post 3 by Jeromea (Kahee!) on Thursday, 10-Jun-2010 21:16:54

I'm not the best of writers, smile.